Friday, July 12, 2013

Introduction to MU Creative Writing Workshop 2013


It was a joy to work with our talented high school students the week of July 8-12 here at Madonna University. From high schools all through Metro Detroit, our students expressed enthusiasm, a sense of fun, and an openness to trying new genres of writing and even filming and film editing. Their creativity and high spirits were infectious; the professors enjoyed the week at least as much as the students. We hope they continue to write and to share their writings with a wider audience. We also hope they nurture their fertile imaginations by exposing themselves to new experiences, such as PAH-Fest Motown. May they return to us as growing writers and possibly university students. We wish them the best in their futures. Remember: Everything is copy.

Dr. Ann Russell, Director of Writing Programs

Ellen Harcourt, Adjunct Professor

Charity Mullaly, Adjunct Professor and Writing Center Specialist

Frances FitzGerald, Writing Center Coordinator, Adjunct Professor



 

The Cool Evening Air by Mesa Marks


The cool evening air felt sharp against my battered skin. The silence of the woods enhanced
my feeling of loneliness. I could taste the coppery tinge of blood in my mouth as his fists collided with my body. All I could see of him was his eyes. Those dark eyes that had once shown his love for me, now took on a more animal like form. I felt so weak, so alone. The raindrops that had begun to fall felt like gunshots against my face and arms. I was helpless, too weak to fight back; all I could do was lie there while he continuously thrust his fists toward my aching body.

            Suddenly, it all stopped. The animal like eyes were scared away by more tender, bright green eyes. He looked intimidating, yet gentle. I flinched as he reached out to me, but he still stood there, cautious, as though waiting for my approval. As he helped me stand up, he wrapped his arms around me like a blanket of warmth and safety. I looked up into those green eyes and began to cry. The rain continued to fall, as though the clouds were weeping along with me. My bruised skin was the only reminder of the horror that had just taken place, the warmth of his embrace made it all seem like a horrid nightmare. I had to remember that this was not just a nightmare though. My mind spun in a tsunami of horror and confusion. In fear of my judgment, my safety, and the man I thought I loved, it was no longer my body that ached, but my heart instead.

Beauty is Terrifying by Alejandro Miranda


There’s something beautiful in stating the obvious

Something powerful about recognizing what everybody knows is already there

It’s like in the movies when they say “pinch me, I must be dreaming”

It’s like when a girl asks you what your favorite part of a woman’s body is and answering incorrectly and say, I like women as a concept, but I never understood how to put theory to practice and for a while…

She stays silent.

I thought I was stating the obvious

But stating the obvious is beautiful, and beauty is embarrassing and being embarrassed freezes people

Because you see beauty is different, beauty is out of the box, out of the ordinary, EXTRAordinary, unique in the way it afflicts each individual thing like your own personal scar and that’s… terrifying.

That’s scary.

It’s scary because I don’t like new things or trying new foods or meeting new people because what if I’m supposed to like it and I just don’t

What if I just don’t care because I how am I supposed to care about the surroundings when I find it hard to care about the system itself and for awhile…

She stays silent

I thought I was stating the obvious

I thought it was obvious that beauty was terrifying and that’s why I never approached you on the pier that night and I watched you wait for something that was already there for hours even though your parents said be home before dark

I thought it was obvious that I was unworthy to witness your beauty, so embarrassing to be caught even near it, because you are everything I wasn’t that night

I thought it was obvious why I never handed you the poems and letters myself, and why you had to read them second hand, itself a reason why you could never look at me as I looked at you

And as I watched you, scared shitless that you would see me for what I was, I realized something that was plain for all to see

I was a boy

A boy terrified of beauty because the ecstasy that comes along with it doesn’t mesh well with Zoloft

I was afraid you would see me stating the obvious

 But I’m not afraid anymore, and I realized that people like to see me do it some more

And I’ll give you one last piece of the obvious

I regret never telling you how I feel

I thought these things, these obvious things, that force that makes us insist on the fact that it exists and how it rams its existence head first into my face with enough force to give me a bloody nose

Like how when it’s hot everybody always tells you “It’s hot”

Yet these things apparent, these obvious facts of life only exist to remind you who you once were, a boy, a son, a caretaker and a dream maker, probably all at once

But these things change as we grow older and we have to grow up and we are all beautiful

Not because of the reasons those Dove commercials say or the fact that we’re all special but because even though there are 7 billion people on this earth

We are all obvious, and we demand to exist

Days and weeks are only separated by a fine line but those terrifying things that we all grow up with remind us to take it slower, or we might just miss what’s right in front of us

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Best Friend by Sarah Kowalewski


 
What I remember about my first horse

was strength and beauty bound together by nature

creating the perfect creature to love and trust

The barn smell radiating from him and his minty breath

The bond shared between myself and

something I can’t even understand

The endless hours watching his graceful movements

out in the pasture

Watching his silliness day in and day out

how he fetched orange cones

and drank orange pop

 

Nothing about him becoming gravely ill

Nothing about losing my best friend



 

Just Because by Sara Kowalewski


Just Because

 

Just because I’m different,

Doesn’t mean I’m weird.

Doesn’t mean I have no life.

Doesn’t mean I’m not happy.

I’m just expressing myself in my own way.

 

Just because I’m sad,

Doesn’t mean I’m not mad.

Doesn’t mean I’m depressed.

Doesn’t mean I’m okay.

I’m just dealing with grief.

 

Just because I’m Polish,

Doesn’t mean I’m stupid.

Doesn’t mean I like perogies.

Doesn’t mean I know the language.

I’m just proud of my culture.

 

Just because I have a 4.0,

Doesn’t mean I’m a nerd.

Doesn’t mean I don’t know how to have fun.

Doesn’t mean I love school.

It’s just the perfectionist qualities in me.

 

Just because I ride horses,

Doesn’t mean I grew up on a farm.

Doesn’t mean I race racehorses.

Doesn’t mean I am a cowgirl.

I just prefer my horse to you.

 
 

Just because I am different,

Doesn’t mean I care what you think.

Doesn’t mean I’m a loser.

Doesn’t mean you shouldn’t be my friend.

It’s just that my choices are important to me.

 

I Pushed the Dishwasher Closed by Bethany Fink

 
​I pushed the dishwasher closed, careful not to rip my headphones out of my ears. My brother and I were home alone. It was my turn for chores.

​I hopped down the stairs, wiggling my hips and waving my arms like a madman. I quickly poured out a portion of food for each of my dogs. One scoop, two scoops. Wash. Rinse. Repeat.

​My dogs ate up the food. I mouthed the words to the song and mimicked drumming the beats. Once they were done, I let them outside, their tails wagging happily behind them. I smiled slightly.

​I called out my brother’s name. I didn’t hear him call back, but my music could’ve been blocking the sound.

​His door was already open slightly. I took out my phone and clicked the volume down. I put my hand on the door and pushed.

​My jaw hung open. My phone hit the floor, the album art disappearing as the headphones were unplugged. Time slowed to a crawl. I cried out, running across the room. My knees gave out under me. I tried to read the piece of paper on the ground, but the words blurred together. My eyes drifted upwards to my brother’s feet, swaying inches from the floor.
 
 
 
 

Just Because Poem by Michaela Landman


Just Because Poem

 

Just because I’m quiet

Doesn’t mean I’m stuck-up

Doesn’t mean I’m full of myself

Doesn’t mean I’m moody

I’m shy.

 

Just because I’m Mexican

Doesn’t mean I should be a brunette

Doesn’t mean I do drugs

Doesn’t mean I’m dumb

I’m an A student.

 

Just because I get irritated

Doesn’t mean I’m awful

Doesn’t mean I have no heart

Doesn’t mean I’m always mean

I’m not perfect.
 
 

Anything for My Angel - A Short Horror Story by Christopher Harness


             Chief Mason was having one of those rough nights at work, “I’m sorry to bring you in this late, honey, but can you take a seat?”

            “Sure, Dad, what do you want?” said Rose, his daughter, following instructions.

            There was no other way to break it to her. The painful truth wasn’t easy to share to anyone, not even the friends and family of this certain victim. “There is no easy way to put this, but a friend of yours, he was found dead this morning…”

            “Oh, my God, who?” responds his daughter in shock.

            “It appears that Alexander Pedder, your-um boyfriend, died this morning by shooting himself in the forehead with a suppressed handgun.” She covers her mouth with complete fright. “His body was retrieved this morning by a riverbank.”

             “Why would he ever do such a thing? He loved me!” She cries out as she curls up into her father’s arms, staining his report files with her tears. “I can’t lose anybody anymore!”

            “I’m so sorry, I know it’s been a rough year for you because of Kelly’s suicide…”

She interrupts in a sorrowful tone, “What should I do?”
            Chief Mason couldn’t see his daughter like this again, he comes up with a logical solution, “Honey, I think your mother and I should put you into counseling. I don’t want you to ruin yourself over these losses.”

            “Daddy I don’t need counseling! I’m a senior for God’s sake!”

            “Oh Rosie, it’s only for the best…”

            A deputy begins to escort the grieving Rose out of the office, there was nothing to prevent such an incident like this. The police chief watches his daughter dragging herself out of the door with tears, flooding her face. Poor kid, he thought, she doesn’t deserve to be with people like him, ones who would rather take their own lives using sheer cowardliness to rid themselves out of what could become a perfect life for them. “This damned world…” he gets out of his chair and proceeds out of his office to call it a night.

            Alexander Pedder was an idol at Drakeland High School. From commanding the marching band as the senior drum major to achieving the highest grades imaginable. His personality wasn’t golden, however. He was a man who always relied on his ego, due to where it has gotten him to in the past, instead of showing compassion to people he viewed as “socially rejected” in his high school community. His death was unlike anything he has done before, but what could have influenced it?

            One afternoon, Alex made the usual trip down to the Government room to greet his girlfriend of four months, Rosemary Mason, before he headed off to lunch, but today seemed to be very peculiar to him, where could his beloved Rosie be?

            Instead of making the effort to find her, Alex just shrugs it off and heads toward his locker to fetch his car keys for lunch. The senior hallway ranked of decaying meat and other putrid odors that penetrated through his nose. Janitors must be working on the bathrooms, thought Alex. The closer his footsteps were from the locker, the stronger the odors became. He couldn’t bear any more of the stench, so he lengthens his stride to prevent anymore suffering from his hallway trip. As he opens his locker, something hard hits the floor.

            “What the hell?” says Alex noticing the blood and flesh all over his pant leg. Suddenly, his distraction shifts toward the object that hit the ground, the head of Rosemary.

            “Ruh-ruh-Rosie?” examining the head, he finds a roll of paper in her mouth. He opens it:

You R Next…

            It was written in blood, Rosemary’s blood. Quickly, he places the head back in the locker and heads to the nearest water fountain to clear any suspicion of him being a murderer. He rushes back to his locker only to find the blood gone, and then he opens the locker, no head, but something else. A rope. What could all of this mean? thought Alex. No time to act. He had to get out of the school before something strange could happen to him. He got to his pickup truck and begins his journey to the nearest fast food restaurant down the road so he can wipe away this horror from his mind. Clouds began to form around him, as if day has transformed into night, and the rain starts to pour.
 
 

            “Just my luck!” curses Alex. Just two more miles to go; he could already hear the thunder cracking down towards him. A tree could not bear the whiplash sent from the lightning causing it to begin its crash-course to the hood of the old Ford pick-up. The impact shot Alex through the glass and onto the road, scraping his very flesh onto the dirt and broken glass; however, he remains intact. Before fading to white, Alex looks around for help and sees a figure of a tall, lanky, awkward girl strutting towards him. The lightning then wipes away her darkness to reveal only rotting flesh and bone, with rope burns around her neck. Alex hurdles back towards the tree and sees nooses tied to every tree branch surrounding him. This is a nightmare. No. This is a punishment, a curse. Instead of running to a hospital for aid, Alex limps towards the girl, trying to figure the truth behind this torture. Lightning strikes him down to the pavement as the winds intensify, tearing the road behind the demon-spirit of the girl.

            “Why?” he whimpers in the roaring wind.

There would be no response from her, only the pointing of a rotting, bony finger calling judgment upon the cowardly prep-boy. Before another bolt of lightning could strike him, whiteness draws closer to Alex. A saving grace? The blinding light distracts Alex from his surroundings, the only sound being the silencing of the storm.  As color fills his sight, the spirit was now a pile of ash.

“Get in!” It was Rosemary driving her father’s Chrysler 200. The grill seemed to have an impacting dent when she arrived. Has she killed the spirit? Has she weakened it temporarily in order to rescue him? No time for questions, Alex thought, I should get into the car. Why should this two-faced man receive redemption? The awards he won and deeds he done modified his personality, but in an ugly way. It just goes to show that not that many people are wise enough to stand up against the popular kid in school and would instead conform to the ways of his or her personality just to be accepted. This wasn’t the case for the dead girl standing in the road; she wanted to show how anyone could be accepted in school by just being themselves. Rosemary pulls over to a foggy graveyard, an unusual place for her to stop by.

“Get out, I need to show you something.” instructs Rose.

“What are you talking about? Did you not see that girl in the road!? She wanted me Rose, I don’t know what for, but I need help…” says the crying teen. This day has turned into a total nightmare and the last place he wanted to be was a resting place for the souls of the damned.

“I’ll explain everything, trust me.” She kisses him on the cheek, and he follows along in response. “Four months ago, there was a freshman, my cousin,” as soon she started the story, Alex beings to panic. “She wasn’t the most popular, as a matter a fact, I think she joined the band program just to fit in; anyway, every attempt she made to share the power of friendship it always ended in a disaster. No matter how hard I tried to include her in any social activity, she would always shy away knowing how hurt she had become from previous attempts. There were always people she idolized at school, the drum majors, the teachers, even the student council.”

“Did I know her?” questions Alex, being afraid of where he’ll end up next.  

“I suppose so, but you would have never talked to her as a friend…” She guesses.

“And why is that?” responds Alex in his cocky tone. Alex never liked being held back from the truth. He always wants to hear what people have to say about him, no matter what kind of answer he is expecting; however, there was no answer from her. Rose wasn’t even making eye contact with him; instead, she was staring at a headstone. Alex looks down and reads:

 

Here Lies the Rested Soul of

Kelly Marie Reinhardt

He looks back at the teary-eyed Rosemary and it all started to make sense to him. He remembers the awkward moments of Kelly trying to make friends, messing up on marching drills, and never receiving help or influence from anyone. He remembers walking away or asking her to leave in a polite, but sarcastic tone whenever she participated in events that would involve people such as herself. How could she have bared such pain? Suddenly, he remembers his friend, Robert Cluez, and how he started the bullying rally. Shortly after Kelly’s death, Cluez was found dead in his car from a razor wire that burned into his neck. Alex checks on Rosemary:

“Rose, are you feeling okay?” says Alex in a caring tone.

Rose then draws out a firearm, fitted with a pop can suppressor, “You’re next.” The weapon whispers through the fog as Alex trembles to the ground. Rose leaves the gun beside her dead, would-be “lover” along with a half emptied bottle of hallucinogenic drugs beside his hand.

“It’s done, my angel.” she leaves the headstone and drives off into the darkness around her…

 

Red by Sara Staffen

Red is anger, tragedy, craziness, frustration, passion, desperation
 
Red feels like driving fast down a dead-end street, or getting a phone call from someone who just called to break you
 
Red sounds like flames of fire crackling.
 
Red smells smoking hot, and sweet and smooth at the same time.
 
Red tastes like a juicy strawberry, or spicy pepper.
 
Red looks bright and burning.
 
Red is what you think of when you think of failed relationships, of crazy love, and strong emotion.
 
 

 
 
 

The Forest by Sara Staffen

 
 
The stars winked at me


Spanning on far as the eye could see


The ominous dark began to settle


A water droplet made no more sound


Than a thrown pebble


I traveled along the woods on feet


And the breeze shook a tall tree


Bright light struck what seemed to be nothing


And I knew in that moment what was coming


I felt in the air, did not hear a sound


My head was not afraid, yet my heart gave a pound


Thunder growled, and rain started to pour


A lonely cabin shook from the impact of the storm
 
 
 
 


 

 
 

The Instrument by Sara Staffen

 
My face is polished and smooth


I smell of crisp wood


My sight is beautiful and inviting to any player


Who picks me up for good


The taste in the air is sweet


Like a newly written song


The sound of crisp strings is music


If the right notes are hit along




 

 




 

 


 

 
 

Wishful Thinking by Sara Staffen


Dreams are wonderful, beautiful, mysterious.


Anyone can have a dream, from you or me or Dr. King.


They are often perceived as a difficult thing,


Something that is conjured up but never attained.


But that is far from true, however


As one can pursue their dream whenever, whoever, whatever


For it takes anyone to dream a simple dream,


But only a dreamer has the courage to chase them.


 



 


 

 


 
 

Supernatural Fiction: The Warning by Julia Moore


I have had what I believe to be the most remarkable night in my life, and while the events are still fresh in my mind, I wish to put them down on paper as clearly as possible.

What I am about to tell you may frighten you; you may begin to doubt my experiences. But, I can assure you that everything is true.

It all started when I laid down for bed. My friends and I are staying at my family’s cottage. It’s a charming little place, but that’s beside the point. The cottage is in a small town, the kind of town where everyone knows each other. The town is rumored to have strange activities occur. Activities of demonic behavior. I have never believed all the rumors. They are often told by the natives who are a little, odd.

Tonight has changed all of my beliefs.
 

So, as I was beginning to tell you, I had retired for the night. My friends had also retired, so the noises I was hearing couldn’t have been them, could it? The piercing screams from down the stairs couldn’t have been them.

They are pulling a cruel joke, I thought at first, they were screaming ear piercing screams just to frighten me. After all they know about the rumors too.

Maybe they are calling for help, a small voice in the back of my head whispered, Maybe the stories about the demons that Mr. Trancy told were true.

My body shivered at the memory, causing me to pull the sheets around me. But I didn’t believe that stuff. I won’t believe that outrageous tale. There’s no way there’s demonic activity here in my cottage.

Everything’s the same, the voice whispered again; maybe she’s coming for you. Elizabeth’s revenge Henry, Elizabeth’s revenge.

Unable to take it anymore, I ran down the stairs to invistage. All my friends were sleeping peacefully, not a thing out of order. Also the screaming had ceased.

“I must be going crazy,” I remember mumbling to myself as I returned upstairs to the attic.

As soon as I was settled, that awful screaming started again! Once more I ran down the stairs, and everything still was in place, the screaming ceased once more.

This occurred several times and finally I stopped going down the stairs. The screaming continued and I tried to ignore it, but I couldn’t bring myself to! It was just so awful, so horrid!

Like a woman calling for her husband, to get her revenge.

I shook the thought from my mind. It isn’t true!

Then it all stopped.

Fright rendered me immobile. I had no choice but to stay in bed as the footsteps made their way up the stairs.

“Richard,” a name was called, “oh Richard, I know you didn’t mean to do it. I tried to warn you.”

This time the ear piercing scream came from me as a shadow came into my view.

“I’m not Richard!” I shouted. “Leave me alone!”

“Henry?”  Its high pitched voice called my name this time, sending every nerve in my body on end.

As I closed my eyes, not wanting to witness what happened next, everything stopped. That brings us to this very moment. I do now believe there is something wrong with this small town. I have no doubt something sinister lives here because scratched on the wooden wall is: “Trancy was right.”

“Now no one can say I didn’t warn them.” A voice said, laughing.

 

Summer by Jake McElmeel


What I remember about that July
Is the bluest of blue skies and water
Blissful and cheerful
With my cousin; something
I wished could last forever
Childhood sense of complete
perfection; happy dog
Streaked white clouds
Then rush, blend of colors
Making the sky turn
Gray
Sitting in the back of the car, dread in my stomach

Nothing about the accident
Nothing about the shadow that loomed over all of us


                                       

Laugh by Libby Mathias



 

            They say laughter prolongs your life. If so, then I have many years ahead of me.  It is my drug of choice. A medication whose label wrapped around its orange plastic bottle reads possible side effects as a positive outlook, jubilance, and a temporary warm feeling inside. All the symptoms of this addiction are positive. No needles, loss of memory, or driving impairment. My addiction hasn’t cost me a dime. People underestimate the power of this drug. Life isn’t a cake walk full of decorated tables abundant with savory sweets and treats. There is ugly in this world.  Disappointment, backstabbing, anxiety, dishonesty, heartbreak, regret, and rejection all have the potential to completely counteract the effects of my trusty medicine. When they reach this dangerous potential the withdrawal pain they cause is excruciating. If I don’t get a fix before it’s too late, I am broken. A shadow is cast over my life and my head hangs low with sadness. However, as soon as I can get my hands on my long lost friend, the pieces start to come back together. The heavy load carried in my heart becomes lighter. I’ve learned my lesson and no longer let these dangerous feelings wreck my high. A laugh is the most potent form of happiness and relaxation in existence. It has the ability to turn darkness to light. There is no guarantee that these depressants will cease to be in my life and try to interfere with my trusty stimulant. Tears will run down my cheeks for the rest of my life, but as long as most are tears of happiness then that’s perfectly fine with me.